What’s it like to be dead, she wonders.
What does one feel?
She stares at her firstborn sleeping peacefully… everyone says he’s dead. That he can’t ‘feel’. Anything. Anymore.
What about her, then? She couldn’t feel anything either.
Probably never will.
This feeling is what really matters, she decides.
May be, she’s dead too.
Posted in Fiction
What was this about???
me: just fiction!
By: ~nm on May 5, 2008
at 6:02 am
Er… but why, Chandu?
me: Why? Its fiction baba!
By: Suki on May 5, 2008
at 6:49 am
“What about her, then? She couldn’t feel anything either.
Probably never will.”
Shouldn’t it be either “She can’t feel anything either” or “Probably never would”? Both aren’t going together, in my opinion.
Strong and crisp, otherwise.
me: hon, if I knew that much english, you thi nk i’d be sitting here writing blogs? 
By: Unmana on May 5, 2008
at 7:21 am
reminds me of the description of death I read recently..hey did not know you were into 55 fiction too :)..
me: I try!
By: Rambler on May 5, 2008
at 7:57 am
me: what happened?
By: Divya on May 5, 2008
at 8:55 am
some fiction! this is sad
me: That was the idea!
By: La Vida Loca on May 5, 2008
at 10:47 am
Fuck wow! I wanted to try doing this 55 thing, but I’m afraid I won’t manage.
That was amazing.
me: of course u can! just try! 
By: Moo on May 5, 2008
at 10:54 am
me: hey, its just fiction!
By: Vrij on May 5, 2008
at 11:17 am
me: awwwwwwww
By: snippetsnscribbles on May 5, 2008
at 11:25 am
hw do u do it? write so much in such few lines?
me: Thank you! that’s a great compliment!
By: churningthewordmill on May 5, 2008
at 12:07 pm
Did not know what Fiction 55 was. Checked on Wikipedia.Very interesting!!!I am going to try it too
me: please do! its a lot of fun! and where is the tag??
By: Indian Homemaker on May 5, 2008
at 9:12 pm
Wow. Real good.
applause @ Unmana for pointing out the grammar.
me:
By: Lively on May 6, 2008
at 12:22 am
Woww, this is awesome.. so much emotions and so deep.. all in 55words..
i shd give this a shot…
me: do that!
By: Aaarti on May 6, 2008
at 1:38 am
This sounds like me!
me: yes maam1 Inspired by ur death post
By: D on May 6, 2008
at 1:53 am
Wow!! You have such a good flair for this. And it is so good, that I am not even going to psychoanalyze it. Speaking as a guy, instead of purse stories we want more 55 (sorry :P).
me: Ok fine! I get the point!
Goes away to sulk.
By: Rambunctious WhipperSnapper on May 6, 2008
at 3:54 am
Thats a good one! I must admit I liked your previous 55 much better. It had a much bigger story packed in it. But you are good at it!!
me: Thank you!
By: Never Mind on May 6, 2008
at 10:46 am
Dude … I was actually giving you a complement. I like the story!! I told you I can never say the right things
*goes to bang head on wall*
me: awwww…I was just kidding….the dramatic effect remember??
By: Rambunctious WhipperSnapper on May 6, 2008
at 1:35 pm
Nice. I like it..has more rawness than the first one you wrote in this form.
me: thank you Sir! Can’t wait to se you and get those gifts 
By: Shuunya on May 7, 2008
at 5:52 am
Hmmmmm… Makes me sad. Hmph. And angry.
me: all in 55 words?
By: siropdevanille on May 8, 2008
at 2:35 am
By: Aaarti on May 9, 2008
at 4:19 am
This made me not sad or angry, just impressed.
A lot to state in 55 words, beautiful.
me: Thanks so much
By: chennairamblings on May 15, 2008
at 5:16 am
Hehehe….this reminds of this Rush song called ‘I think I’m goinf bald”
me: heh!
By: MisterCrowley on May 15, 2008
at 6:02 am
oh ouch.
me: I know…
By: the mad momma on May 18, 2008
at 3:05 am
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